... Foreshadowing? [ Is that the word? Whatever. He just wrote what felt right. At least the fall got across. ]
There's a lot of waiting.
[ The fall probably took almost a minute before he hit the ground. That's a rather long stretch of time to contemplate your upcoming death. And she seems incredibly touched by the piece. He hopes she's touched anyway, and not horrified to tears by it. ]
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There's a lot of waiting.
[ The fall probably took almost a minute before he hit the ground. That's a rather long stretch of time to contemplate your upcoming death. And she seems incredibly touched by the piece. He hopes she's touched anyway, and not horrified to tears by it. ]